Tuesday, September 27, 2011
Ben i have to say that you make a really great but radical point. By basically taking sides with the Indians during those times and proving exactly how wrong Americans were for treating the natives like that you achieved ultimate radicalism. In the beginning of your short essay the way you describe the Indians is not in great taste, however when you begin your comparison of government, social habits, and culture between the natives and Americans you really show your unique way of thinking and great way of reasoning. Overall i really did like your piece, you really captured the intelligence level and goodheartedness of the natives while showing how uncivil and rude Americans can actually be. Its almost like a role reversal between the two groups, great work.